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In English, Please

The following writing samples were taken from mutual fund prospectuses written before and after the SEC issued its new plain English guidelines.




                 OLD



JOHN HANCOCK     The fund utilizes a strategy of investing in those common

BALANCED         stocks which have record of having increased their share-

SOVEREIGN        holder dividend in each of the preceding ten years or

BALANCED         more.

FUND             READABILITY: COLLEGE JUNIOR





STATE STREET     The net asset value of the fund's shares fluctuates as

RESEARCH EQUITY  market conditions change.

INCOME FUND      READABILITY: FIRST YEAR GRADUATE SCHOOL





                 NEW



JOHN HANCOCK     The fund's stock investments are exclusively

BALANCED         in companies that have increased their dividend

SOVEREIGN        payout in each of the last ten years.

BALANCED

FUND             READABILITY: COLLEGE FRESHMAN





STATE STREET     The fund's shares will rise and fall in value.

RESEARCH EQUITY  READABILITY: COLLEGE FRESHMAN

INCOME FUND



DATA: FUND PROSPECTUSES; MARK HOCHHAUSER


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